请你根据所给材料、提纲以及要求写一篇英文稿件。背景材料:编者按:本期刊出Lora的来信,欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。 Dear editor.I’m a senio

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请你根据所给材料、提纲以及要求写一篇英文稿件。
背景材料:
编者按:本期刊出Lora的来信,欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。
Dear editor.
I’m a senior high school student,and I want to work part-time this summer. I think it is good to do so, but my parents don’t agree with me. I just can’t understand them and I need your advice.
Lara
要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数120左右。
3.内容充实,可适当增加使行文流畅,结构完整,语意连贯。
4.书写须清晰、工整。
提纲:第1段:Lora利用暑假打工的理由(赚零花钱及学会独立、如何处世等)
第2段:Lora父母不同意的理由(对学习及个人安全等方面的考虑)
第3段:你给Lora的具体建议
I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time.
    
    I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time . First, she can make some pocket money to meet her daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve social skills. 

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(答案→)I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time . First, she can make some pocket money to meet her daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve social skills. 
解析:考查提纲类作文的写作。话题是就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议,所以首先要审题,找出要点,要点是以提纲的形式表示的,第1段:Lora利用暑假打工的理由(赚零花钱及学会独立、如何处世等)第2段:Lora父母不同意的理由(对学习及个人安全等方面的考虑)第3段:你给Lora的具体建议要适当增加细节,不能只是把要点翻译成英语、,注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,使文章成为一个整体。提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备,不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式,所以在写作的时候要变换句式,不能一个句式一成不变,要给阅卷老师新鲜的感觉。
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