假如你是李华。你的朋友Mike 染上了烟瘾，请你写一封信说服他戒烟。
要点如下:
吸烟的危害
1. 危害自身和他人健康
2. 污染空气
3. 其它原因
戒烟方法
1. 远离吸烟者
2. 逐渐减少吸烟量
3. 其它方法
词数：100-120 左右，信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Mike,
Recently I have noticed that you are addicted to smoking.
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Quitting smoking is not as hard as you think. If you keep trying you will succeed.
Yours,
Li HuaRecently I have noticed that you are addicted to smoking. Whenever you start smoking, the room is filled with a terrible smell. By no means should you go on with this addiction.
网友回答
(答案→)Recently I have noticed that you are addicted to smoking. Whenever you start smoking, the room is filled with a terrible smell. By no means should you go on with this addiction.
解析：书信是同学们比较熟悉的写作体裁，而且开头结尾已经给出，同学们只需用通顺的语言表述清所要求的要点即可。首先在文章开头要提出写信的目的，即劝Mike戒烟。根据提示信息，文章可以使用一般现在时，内容应该包括吸烟的危害和戒烟的方法两大主要内容。在列举危害和戒烟的方法时要注意使用表顺序的连接词，比如first 、second、third或者on the one hand 、on the other hand等，这样会使文章条理性更强。此外，在遣词造句上，应多用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如定语从句、倒装结构、非谓语动词等，以提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】在文章第一段作者提出自己反对Mike吸烟，然后第二段讲述吸烟的危害，第三段介绍戒烟的方法，最后鼓励Mike，希望他戒烟成功。文章要点齐全，语言通顺，很好地完成了写作任务。for one thing，for another thing，to begin with，at the same time等短语的使用也使文章层次清晰，结构紧凑。此外，文中出现的固定句型it is high time that…..,条件状语从句If you keep trying, you will succeed.，倒装句By no means should you go on with this addiction.等也使文章亮点纷呈。