假如你是某班班长,最近你和班委们要组织一次郊游,有关本次活动的信息如下: 游览地点白云山郊游原因高三学生忙于准备高考,学习压力大,应劳逸结合。郊游目的1.亲近大自然,呼吸新鲜空气,

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假如你是某班班长,最近你和班委们要组织一次郊游,有关本次活动的信息如下:
游览地点
白云山
郊游原因
高三学生忙于准备高考,学习压力大,应劳逸结合。
郊游目的
1.  亲近大自然,呼吸新鲜空气,享受阳光;
2.  欣赏美景之余放松自己,释放压力,提高学习效率。
出发时间
本星期天上午8:00
集中地点
学校门口
【写作内容】
请你根据上面表格提供的信息,向同学们介绍组织这次郊游的原因和目的等情况,动员全班同学参加这次活动。
【写作要求】
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 文章的开头和结尾已经为你写好(所给句子不计入5个句子之中)。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整和连贯。
参考词汇: 高考 College Entrance Examination
We have decided to go for an outing to Baiyun Mountain this weekend.     
I hope all the students can take part in the activity.As we all know, we senior 3 students are so busy preparing for the ing College Entrance Examination that we are faced with great pressure and have little time to do something else. In order to keep a balance between work and rest, we think it’s good idea for us to get close to nature on the weekend to breathe the fresh air and enjoy the sunshine. By doing that, not only can we enjoy the beautiful scenery but we can also relax ourselves. Meanwhile, we can ease our pressure and make our study more efficient. Those who want to take part in the outing are expected to meet at the school gate an 8:00 this Sunday morning . 

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(答案→)As we all know, we senior 3 students are so busy preparing for the ing College Entrance Examination that we are faced with great pressure and have little time to do something else. In order to keep a balance between work and rest, we think it’s good idea for us to get close to nature on the weekend to breathe the fresh air and enjoy the sunshine. By doing that, not only can we enjoy the beautiful scenery but we can also relax ourselves. Meanwhile, we can ease our pressure and make our study more efficient. Those who want to take part in the outing are expected to meet at the school gate an 8:00 this Sunday morning . 
解析:考查应用文写作。本文是一篇介绍郊游信息的短文,本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
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