请根据以下提示,并结合你生活中的实例,用英语写一篇短文。 Forgiveness is one of the most loving actions you can take fo

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请根据以下提示,并结合你生活中的实例,用英语写一篇短文。
Forgiveness is one of the most loving actions you can take for yourself.
注意:1. 无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
除诗歌外,文体不限;
词数为120左右。Forgiveness is not something you give to someone else. It is a gift you give to yourself. 

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(答案→)Forgiveness is not something you give to someone else. It is a gift you give to yourself. 
解析:考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语:end in failure“以失败告终”, let out 泄露,broke up. 分手,at the cost of以…为代价, keep… in my mind 记住,not only… but also…不但,而且,还有范文中的句式也很出彩: Forgiveness is not something you give to someone else. It is a gift you give to yourself. 这两句话都用了定语从句。Unfortunately, my efforts ended in failure because my closest friend carelessly let out my plan to my opponent. 这句话用了原因状语从句,So disappointed was I that I couldn’t focus my attention on anything. 这句话是倒装句,How tough a time it was until one day it flashed upon me that if I refused to forgive him, I would remain a prisoner of my hatred at the cost of a friend.这句话用了感叹句,宾语从句,和条件状语从句。
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