在中国西部贫困地区有许多留守儿童。他们的父母外出打工挣钱养家。以下这幅图片展现了这群留守儿童的一个生活场景。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 描述图片内容；
2. 简析“留守儿童”这一现象的成因；
3. 谈谈你的感受和愿望。
参考词汇： 文具stationery(不可数名词); 留守儿童left-behind children
要求:
1）词数：150词左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2）文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
As is shown in the picture, several children are crouching (蹲)to the ground in a circle. As we can see in the picture, several children are crouching to the ground in a circle. They are writing down “Mum and Dad, I am missing you.” These left-behind children badly need stationery, dictionaries, schoolbags, TV sets and so on to do well in their studies and enjoy their everyday life.
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(答案→)As we can see in the picture, several children are crouching to the ground in a circle. They are writing down “Mum and Dad, I am missing you.” These left-behind children badly need stationery, dictionaries, schoolbags, TV sets and so on to do well in their studies and enjoy their everyday life.
解析：这是一篇看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了留守儿童的一个生活场景，写作时不要仅仅对图画进行描述，也要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是使用了词组和句式多变：have the right to 有权利做…，enjoy a happy life享受幸福的生活， together with和…一起， One of the reasons is that they live in a less-developed western area with poor transportation and a low-level education.这句话用了表语从句， To improve their living conditions, their parents have to go to big cities to make more money, leaving them at home.这句话用了不定式和现在分词， I suggest we do something such as donating clothes or books, raising money and so on to help them.这句话用了虚拟语气。