英语翻译这句话这样译好吗?“这两个锡点短路导致了这个机器不能正常工作.the machine abnomal operation was caused by the two solder tins short还是这样：the machine operation abnormally ,which is caused by the two solder tins shorted.
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The machine operated abnormally caused by the short of the two solder tins.
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This machine cannot function well because of the short circuit between the two tin-points