我国是一个发展中国家，我们应该勤俭节约，使中国成为—个节约型的社会。我们中学生应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。你是如何做的？请你就这一个话题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，语法正诗，意思完整，80词左右。下列词语供参考(don’t take…，recycle books and pa-per ,tum off …,take your own bags ,don’t use piastic bags ,cut down ,take care of- -)
What will you do to save energy ? I think we should do followings :First, it’ s best to ride a bike to school , don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second , I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third ,in my free time , I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling . The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I’m not using it .Fifth, it is important to save water and money .Also , I won’t spend too much money on expensive things . Last , we had better not cut down the trees , we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save energy ,I hope I can do something for our country .
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(答案→)What will you do to save energy ? I think we should do followings :First, it’ s best to ride a bike to school , don’t take a bus or a taxi. Second , I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. Third ,in my free time , I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling . The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I’m not using it .Fifth, it is important to save water and money .Also , I won’t spend too much money on expensive things . Last , we had better not cut down the trees , we have to take care of the trees . I’ll try my best to save energy ,I hope I can do something for our country .
解析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料比较简单，需要自己围绕材料适当发挥。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性,注意应用所给单词，短语。结合材料可知本文主要是一般将来时态，第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。