英文作文评改~最好给个分数（15分） Greating a Green Campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要,2绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境.,3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该.正文：The campus is where we live and study.Only in a good environment can we study and live better.So creating a Gr
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dont start with a sentence with 'so'
green campus DOESNT only mean...
not need for a ma (,) before 'but'
delete the 'i' before 'we'
add 'in' after 'live' ( we need such AN environment to live IN so...)
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try putting a ma instead of a full-stop before 'try' (cherish the environment,try not...)
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(friendly to warm to what?)
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spelling mistake:casually
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resourceS
classES
so lets put some effort the create it