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Dear Jhon,
I have been your family teacher for nearly a month.In this period of time we get along well(with改为well),I have known you better.Now I'm writting (删除to you)to talk with you heart to heart.
You are a lively boy who is full of curiosity.You are interested in everything,cartoon,puter games,for instance,but except your study.Up to a point,I can understand you.You are only a 13-year-old boy,and（but改为and） you have to sit in the classroom for more than 8 hours and do so much homework after school.Even your weekends have to give way to various extra classes.I suppose few people would have interest in things what impose huge pressure on them（him改为them）.However,we have no alternative but to adjust to Chinese educational system. Let's talk about your study.Sometimes you are quiet enough to review your lessons but sometimes you are so active that I could hardly calm you down to concentrate on your homework.Generally speaking,you just can be considerated as a hardworking person(加上person).Beacause of that,you have made such （a删除） great progress which shows your mind is brilliant enough to be qualified for your schoolwork in your math and English in the last exam that it inspires you deeply and stimulates your strong interest in math,even though the score doesn't e up to your mather's expectation.So you see,you can bee interested in something you dislike （before删除） after you have achieve（made改为achieve） some success in（on改为in） it.
When it es to your mother（本句不知是什么意思?）,it seems that your parents are always busy.I even never see y