一篇简单的英语作文需指教.我去阳江市.这是一个非常忙碌的城市,我去我叔叔那里度过暑假.我也去了阳春市的凌霄岩和肇庆市鼎湖山和七星岩.那里的风景非常美丽,虽然七星岩比较出名的,但我认为凌霄岩比七星岩好看多了.然后我把中文翻译为英文.可是有一句我弄不明白.我等等用括号括起来,During the summer vacation,I went to the following.This is a very busy city,I go to my uncle spent summer vacation.I also went to the YangChunShi LingXiaoYan and zhaoqing dinghu mountain and QiXingYan.The scenery is very beautiful,although QiXingYan famouser,but I think LingXiaoYan than QiXingYan much more good-looking.我说（阳春市的凌霄岩和肇庆市鼎湖山和七星岩）和（但我认为凌霄岩比七星岩好看多了.）这句要怎么翻译成英文,我觉得有些错误,能帮我改下吗? 英语
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【答案】 我看了的你,很多地方有错误,语法也不通顺.下面是我改了的哈.i spent my summer vacation in my uncle's home,and also went to many places,such as the Ling Xiao Yan which located in YangChun city,Mount Dinghu and Qixing Yan which located in Zhaoqing City.it is a prosperous city.the scenery is very beautiful.Although Qixing Yan is more famous,but i think LingXiao yan is better than the former.