可以帮我看一下这一篇英语习作吗?可以是错误与建议,A SEAT One day,I went out.I was standing on a bus .I was not felling well.The bus was crowded with lots of people and very hot.My leg ached because of standing.I don't like th
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主语不一致with lots of people and very hot
This seat not for you应该加is吧
The old woman saidOh,child,It's nothing...'”She was smiling.
最好是：she said with smileYoung man's face became red.
His face turned red most people改为most of the people
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