请高手批改一篇高中英语作文Holy place in my mindDo you have a favorite place?Maybe everyone will say “yes”.But the answer can be very different.If you ask me,I’d say “the museum” without doubt.In fact,it is more th
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第一段In fact,it is more than the favorite; museum is a holy place in my mind.中的than应该删掉
第二段But I surely know I fell in love with it since I was 9-year-old.应该将fell in love改为fall in love,后面9-year-old应该改成9 years old
They were about many different domains,such as astronomy,history,science and art.It was such a great feeling!此句主语于应该改为There were .
People said that museum was a good place to appreciate and relax.中的said应该为say,同样,was改为is,与此相同的下一句的It really was.应该是It really is.
最后一段I can’t stop myself loving the place.Not only do I feel good here中的myself应该省略(当然加上也没有错),而后面的应该是do i feel it good,而应该把后面的here删去
就只有这些了,是拜托我的老师修改的,有什么问题可以联系我~
说实话,你的英语啊蛮好的