does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)Th

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第二行 After I gave .一般过去时应该就行吧.
第四行 in 去掉.live 改为 stay 吧
第五行 says 去掉
倒数第四行 Where have you been?
倒数第二行 always?打错了貌似； 改为I followed her out of the fair.
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供参考答案1:
2010年十一月.18日星期四多云
我决定去在一个乡村集市上一算命先生称，集市。当我走进她的帐篷去了，她让我坐下。当我给了她一些美元，她开始寻找一个水晶球，说：“您的一个亲戚来看望你，她会迟到今天下午，准备住上几天。你会惊奇地走出走出帐篷。女人你躲到哪儿去对你和她说你会说些什么。并带领你离开这里。这就是一切。“
我刚忘了别林斯夫人对我说，当我离开了帐篷，因为我的妻子向我冲去。 “你去哪儿？”她焦急地问。 “你姐姐会来这里不到一个小时的时间。我们必须去车站接她。这晚，现在。“时，她就常，我跟着她走出了集市。
用翻译软件翻译的，哈哈。熊猫培训网提供
供参考答案2:
when I gone out 换成 i went out
其他正确 这一刻 让我想起我童年时候学英语的时候了 谢谢你
供参考答案3:
I decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky, at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I had given her some dollars, she started looking into a crystal ball and said: “a RELATIVE of yours will e to visit you; she will arrive late this afternoon and prepare to live for a few days. You will be surprised to go out of the tent. A woman you know well will rush towards you and she says SHE will say something to you. And lead you to leave here. That is all.”
I had hardly forgotten what madam Bellinsky said to me when I WENT out of the tent because my wife rushed towards me. “Where DID you go?” she asked with impatience. “Your sister will e here in less than an hour. We have to go to the station to meet her. It’s late, now.”When she went AWAY, I followed her to go out of the fair.