下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.friend → friends 

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(答案→)friend → friends 
解析:
【小题1】… most of my friend had bicycles. 改为friends. (most of + 可数名词复数 / 不可数名词)
【小题2】I hoped I could also have it. 改为one (it指代同一件东西;one指代同一类事物)
【小题3】…, that was only one hundred Yuan. 改为which (that不引导非限制性定语从句)
【小题4】I asked my father ∧ the money. 加上for (向某人索要某物:ask sb. for .sth.)
【小题5】He should find the other half myself. 改为I (父亲说给我一半买车的钱,另一半必须“我”自己想办法)
【小题6】So I went to sell newspapers after the school. 去掉the (after school, 固定用法,意为“放学后”)
【小题7】My father was pleasing when… 改为pleased (pleased, 感到高兴;pleasing, 令人高兴)
【小题8】…when I showed him the money a month after. 改为later (later, 副词,意为“后来”; after, 介词或连词,后接名词或句子)
【小题9】He gives me the other fifty. 改为gave (时态错误。父亲“给”钱发生于过去)
【小题10】You can imagine what happy I was… 改为how (what是代词,后接名词;how是副词,后接形容词或副词。happy是形容词,前面应用how)
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