中国人不善于向家人表达“爱”,但你认为告诉家人你爱他们很重要。请以“Ways to express love to my family”为题,写出如何向家人表达“爱”。提示:1如

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中国人不善于向家人表达“爱”,但你认为告诉家人你爱他们很重要。请以“Ways to express love to my family”为题,写出如何向家人表达“爱”。
提示:1.如果父母生日,当面向他们说“我爱你们”‘
2.经常帮助家人做家务;
3.经常拥抱父母;
4.你自己的看法。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ways to express love to my family
    There are various ways to express love. I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them. 

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(答案→)There are various ways to express love. I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them. 
解析:本文是一篇说明文。文章给出了简单的汉语提示,文章话题贴近学生生活,让他们有话可说。成文时应注意:1.文章内容要点要齐全;(1)如果父母生日,当面向他们说“我爱你们”(2)经常帮助家人做家务;(3)经常拥抱父母;(4)你自己的看法。2.人称:第一人称为主;3.时态:一般现在时;4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型,以提高文章的档次;5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅。
【亮点说明】使用了从句:1.I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do , especially when they are tired after work , my parents must feel my love to them . 2. because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other , which does good to their health .使用了动名词短语:Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved 使用了插入语:Besides
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