假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.in 改为on
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(答案→)in 改为on
解析：
【小题1】在具体的某一天应使用介词on，此处是具体指2007年2月8日的早晨，故in 改为on
【小题2】e out of为瞬间动词，while是指时间段，不能和瞬间动词连用，而when既可以指时间点也可以指时间段，可以和瞬间动词连用，故while改为when
【小题3】one。。。the other 一边。。。另一边，街道的另一边应该用the other side
【小题4】and 连接drive和make，做see的宾语补足语，see somebody do故应将made改为make
【小题5】主句提到the man故she应该 改为he
【小题6】and连接并列的动词，前面用了didn’t stop，过去时，故and后的drive改为drove
【小题7】at a full speed 以全速，在全速度
【小题8】woman 后面是一个定语从句，从句缺引导词，故在woman后加who或将wore改为wearing做后置定语。
【小题9】两分钟后用After two minutes 或two minutes later
【小题10】现在分词作前置定语，与被修饰词car之间构成主动关系，而且表进行。