高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光,除了学业之外,我们还经历、感悟了许多。为了不留遗憾,在临近毕业时,你将做些什么呢?请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。·要抓紧时间温书迎考;·要主动与对

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高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光,除了学业之外,我们还经历、感悟了许多。为了不留遗憾,在临近毕业时,你将做些什么呢?请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
·要抓紧时间温书迎考;
·要主动与对你有误解的同学沟通;           
·要向老师父母感恩;
·其他你认为值得做的事情。
注意:
1.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
2.短文词数:100词左右
3. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数
We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation. We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation. 

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(答案→)We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation. 
解析:考查说明文中的材料类文章的写作。要求写短文,要点要求都已经给出,短文的关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】文章写的比较简洁,连接词复合句的使用较为准确到位:Not wanting to leave any regret, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and make adequate preparations for the College Entrance Exam这句话放在开头就用了分词作状语结构;I think if of necessity have a heart-to-heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me and smooth away the misunderstanding, for I do treasure our friendship.这句话用了介宾结构以及for引导的原因状语 ;I would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school, which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.这句话中的非限制性定语从句的使用恰到好处;此外,连接词meanwhile, above all等也使得文章更加连贯。
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