文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Wearing a pair of worn-out shoe, he wandered in the street. Though hungry, he could not find a penny in his pockets. Unfortunate, he became homeless, everyone in her family had cut off connection with him. Mild songs from the nearest house remind him of his every particular in acting. Up from now, he has star in more than 80 films, that have entertained many people. He was considered to be a out-standing actor. It was convincing that he would picked out to challenge the Oscar this year. But in now everything has changed.
Wearing a pair of worn-out shoe, he wandered in the street. Though hungry, he could
shoes
not find a penny in his pockets. Unfortunate, he became homeless, everyone in her family
Unfortunately his
had cut off connection with him. Mild songs from the nearest house remind him
reminded
of his every particular in acting. Up from now, he has star in more than 80
to starred
films, that have entertained many people. He was considered to be a out-
which an
standing actor. It was convincing that he would ∧ picked out to challenge the
be
Oscar this year. But in now everything has changed.
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Wearing a pair of worn-out shoe, he wandered in the street. Though hungry, he could
shoes
not find a penny in his pockets. Unfortunate, he became homeless, everyone in her family
Unfortunately his
had cut off connection with him. Mild songs from the nearest house remind him
reminded
of his every particular in acting. Up from now, he has star in more than 80
to starred
films, that have entertained many people. He was considered to be a out-
which an
standing actor. It was convincing that he would ∧ picked out to challenge the
be
Oscar this year. But in now everything has changed.
解析：
1. 本处表示一双鞋，要用a pair of shoes，鞋子是成对的，要用复数。
2. 表示不幸的，我们要用副词。
3. 文章讲的这个人是用的he，故其形容词性物主代词只能用his而非her。
4. 文章讲的是过去的事用的过去时，故时处也要用过去时reminded。
5. 此处考查固定搭配up to now到目前为止，其后跟现在完成时。
6. 本题考查现在完成时，由have/has+过去分词构成，故用其分词形式，star重读闭音节要双写r再加ed，故为starred。
7. 此处考查非限制性定语从句，只能用which而不能用that。
8. outstanding首字母发的双元音/au/ ,故要用an。
9. 本题考查过去将来时，将will变成would，其后加be再加其它成分。
10.Oscar是个专有名词，其前不要用定冠词the，故去掉。