谁能帮我批改一下我的雅思作文啊?我雅思写作垃圾,我看的是慎小嶷的10天写作Many people work at home using modern technology .Some people think only the workers benefit from this ,not the employers.Do you agree or disagree?In this day and
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The workers not only benifit from the modern science ,but also the employers can reduce a lot of cost这句话典型的错误~~
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