请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多

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请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
I was a happy girl with a warmly family. My parents loved each other although my family was poor. But everything changed when my father fell in love by a young girl about two year ago. Since then, quarrels happen at home almost on every day, left me and my sister crying in despair. I hate that woman which stole my father. I even hope to live with her before my parents separate and take revenge (报复) on him. But sometimes I think that is not right and I really didn’t want my parents to divorce. What should I do? Could you give me hand?
A desperate girl 

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解析:
【小题1】warmly改成Warm(用形容词修饰名词)
【小题2】year改成years(前面有two说明用复数形式)
【小题3】by改成with(fall in love with爱上了)
【小题4】去掉on(every year在句中单独做时间状语)
【小题5】left改成 leaving(现在分词在句中做状语)
【小题6】which改成 who(指代指人的先行词在句中做主语)
【小题7】before改成after(指在我们的父母离婚以后)
【小题8】him改成 her(her指上文的a young girl)
【小题9】didn’t改成 don’t(本文使用一般现在时)
【小题10】Me后面加a(固定词组give sb a hand帮助某人)
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