【求助~!】2011辽宁高考英语作文估分 So I want to apply for the job. I'm Li Hua , a girl of 20 years old. In july, I will be gratuated from Xinxing foreign language school .In the school, I study very hard and do exactly well in the exams. And I'm fluent in the spoken English. Also, I have a wide range of interests in singing, dancing and so on .And I have a good knowledge in the puter. I'm an out-going girl who can make friends with others naturally .What's more, I'm always enthusiastic about the job .If i get the chance to be accepted, I willl make efforts to be the best.我平时考试作文分是18到19 . 请大家能耐心细心地看完~~因为这是要给估分作参考的~!希望能对作文给一些点评~! 英语
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【答案】 大概18左右,因为文中有些地方不是很好,如will be gratuated from ,have a good knowledge in the puter等,还有结尾应该加上期望得到你们的答复这类的句子 追问: 第一个语法错误我知道……第二个词组为什么不合适??开头结尾文中给出来了,不用自己写~ 追答: have a good knowledge of 掌握 即使这样正常情况下最多也就20分,因为有些句子还是不太地道,呵呵,不好意思,实话实说 追问: 啊啊~~没关系……就是想听实话~~要不英语底子也一般……那18,19还是20呢??每一分都很重要啊~~ 追答: 呵呵,那这就搞不清楚了,我改过高考试卷,一般的老师都是先判断在第几等,就如你这篇吧,一般在18-21分之内,然后就看老师心情了,况且是两位老师评分然后以平均就是你的分数