英文信件语法.高赏!就是解释给一个公司说 射杀海豹是人道的.Dear Sir or MadamYour “End Canada’s License to Kill” Campaign is great.Thank you for caring about the seal hunt.However,the seal hunt provides a livelihood to thousands o
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如果有数据支持你的观点应该会更有效.我把捕杀
seal的三部曲细节删掉是因为我不觉得支持动物权益的人会像要知道捕杀的具体步骤.
We'd like to shed new light for you on the issue of seal hunting.Your campaign on End Canada’s License to Kill”
is understandable and respected.However,seal hunting is a crucial source of ine for thousands of coastal
dwellers.They have to rely on seal products to provide for their families.
Moreover,there are several rules and regulations that have been established for the best interest of
preserving the seal population.First,only six species of seals can be hunted,and baby seals can not be hunted.
Second,seal hunting must be conducted humanely.To ensure that seals do not suffer prolonged and painful
death,a three-step killing process,remended by Independent Veterinarians Working Group,must be adopted
in seal hunting; otherwise,the hunters will lose their licenses.
Seal hunting is currently a controlled and regulated activity.Preserving seal population is also on our top agenda.
We do not promote unnecessary killing of seals.Your understanding and support would be much appreciated,because thousands of people's livelihoods are at stake.I hope you can withdraw this campaign.Thank you for your consideration.
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原文:Your “End Canada’s License to Kill” Campaign is great. Thank you for caring about the seal hunt. However, the seal hunt provides a livelihood to thousands of coastal dwellers. These coastal dwellers supporting their families only rely on the seal products.
修改:seal hunt 改成 seal hunting
These coastal dwellers supporting 改成 These coastal dwellers SUPPORT their families only BY the seal products 或者
The costal dwellers' livings only rely on the seal products