求英语改错题这是我已经改好的句子,大家看看有错没有,That the skirt made by Faci has a slit at the bottom makes it difficult if the customer wants us to change the length of the shirt.
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That the skirt made by Faci has a slit at the bottom makes it difficult for us to change the length as asked by the customer.
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供参考答案1:
这句没有语法错误，但是很别扭。主语从句的使用使整个句子有头重脚轻的感觉，句子的中心意思没有突出。 ‘want us to do’用的很生硬。
供参考答案2:
这是由that引导的主语从句，整个句子由两个主从句组成。如果没有that的话我们可以改成：The skirt made by Faci having a slit at the bottom makes it difficult if the customer wants us to change the length of the shirt.
所以说这个句子是对的
PS：后面的shirt应该是skirt吧，和前面的一致。
供参考答案3:
it 应该是形式宾语吧，而if 只能跟条件状语从句，所以有点怪
makes it difficult to change the length of the shirt if the customer wants.