托福作文的准备you agree or disagree with the following statement?The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.我的中文思路已经有了.希望帮我用英语稍微拓展一下,不用写成篇,我想要一些比较重量级的话.中文框架,首先是否定的.原因如下第一,许多商家为了能够赚的更多的钱,在食品中加添加
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思路很棒诶~
作为练习当然可以开外挂查查添加剂地沟油啥啥的英文表达啦
如果考试的时候有完全不会写的专业名词最好跳过 不写比写错要好
不过考试的时候一点小错问题不大啦~
其实能在规定时间内完成作文是一切东东的前提：）
至于你的思路 我把第一点划到科技头上去了 所以重点讲述三鹿奶粉里的三聚氰胺melamine吧 具体你自己查哈~
以下仅供参考 你写完最好找老外批改一下 避免Chinglish:P
First of all,while the rapid development in food technology has benefited us in numerous ways,some panies started to illegally add advanced but poisonous additives to food so as to gain as much profit as they can.A recent case involving such malicious deed concerns a well-known brand,Sanlu Milk Power...
Second of all,the increasing amount of pollution has negatively impacted on not only the air we breathe and the water we drink,but our food as well.Mountains of garbage and waste are poured into the earth and the sea,directly resulting in the malnutrition and variation of the plant and animals dwelling in the polluted areas...
Third of all,the prevalence of fast food has caused hazardous obesity both among adults and among children...
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供参考答案1:
这么写绝对跪.单词量不足以支撑的情况下你写的东西越复杂问题越多。托福中重量级的永远是结构和调理出彩的单词三四个就够。
供参考答案2:
太多了吧！你… 我无话了…