书面表达（10分）假如你是无锡东湖塘中学的一名初三学生，你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr. Wang，告诉他你想推荐Sandy做你们班的班长。请根据下列信息，写完这封信。姓 名Sandy性格聪明：能将所有的事情做好。勤奋：总为班级做额外的工作。有条理(organized)：从不忘记自己需要做的事。乐于助人：乐意时刻帮助别人。爱好喜爱阅读：因为可以从书中学到许多。喜爱蓝色：因为蓝色……；当别人生气或激动时，常能让他们平静下来。
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Dear Mr. Wang
I’m writing to remend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.
Sandy is clever. She can do all the things well. She is hard-working and always does extra work for class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do. She is helpful and ready to help others any time. Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. She loves blue. Blue is a calm colour. It represents peace. When others are angry or excited she can often make them calm down.
I hope that you can agree with me.
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这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: be ready to准备；calm down平静下来。Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books.桑迪喜爱阅读，因为可以从书中学到许多。When others are angry or excited she can often make them calm down. 当别人生气或激动时，常能让他们平静下来。学习中注意总结 牢记一些固定句式及短语 写作时就可以适当引用 使文章的表达更有逻辑性 更富有条理。提纲作文。 名师点评 本题考点 提纲作文
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