第二卷写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改

第二卷
写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（﹨）划掉； 
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词； 
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Tracy,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats              76.    
me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions.           77.        
He is very strict in me and often punishes me for                78       
leaving things lying around in the house when he did this         79.            
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to               80.        
follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.”          81.            
Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests,      82.               
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t            83.              
bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk              84.          
with him but he never listen. Please, help me.                 85.                             
Puzzled      
76. 去掉Although或but                   77. carelessly→careless
78. in→with                                          79. did→does
80. 在all后加the                  81. Doing→Do
82. 去掉 more                                   83. hurting→hurt
84. how→what                                    85. listen→listens