根据汉语提示，完成短文，不少于80字。 要求：书写工整，语句通顺，有逻辑性。
上周六我们在李老师的帮助下一起乘火车去了首都北京，这是我们第一次去北京旅游的介绍。
Many places of interest
Tian’anmen Square
Summer Palace
Palace Museum
The Great Wall
Activities
take photos
eat delicious food
buy some souvenir
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feelings
Learn a lot
hope to visit again
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Last Saturday, we went to the capital of China---Beijing, with the help of Mr Li. We went there by train. It is the first time for us to be there, so we were very excited.
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(答案→)Last Saturday, we went to the capital of China---Beijing, with the help of Mr Li. We went there by train. It is the first time for us to be there, so we were very excited.
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