这是学校学生会最近在全校高中学生中进行的一次“你是否在上课时记笔记?”的调查。你作为校报记者,请用英语将调查的情况写成一篇短文刊登在校报上。【写作内容】调查范围和对象全体高中学生,

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这是学校学生会最近在全校高中学生中进行的一次“你是否在上课时记笔记?”的调查。你作为校报记者,请用英语将调查的情况写成一篇短文刊登在校报上。
【写作内容】
调查范围和对象
全体高中学生,共2105人
调查结果
25%的学生记笔记,他们的学习成绩都较好
37%的学生尝试记笔记,但不会记,希望老师指导
38%的学生根本不记笔记,不知道记什么
调查结果
令人担忧
你对调查结果的看法
……
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。Recently a survey has been carried out on whether you take notes in class or not among all the 2105 senior students. I am so worried about the finding of the survey. The data shows that only a quarter of the students surveyed often take note in class,which helps to get their studies improved ,while about 37% of the students do a try ,but they don't know how to take notes ,hoping to get a hand from the teachers. To my surprise, from the survey I know about 38% of the students have never taken notes, for they have no idea what to take in class. In my opinion, our teachers should tell the students what to write down in class so that we can make greater progress in study. 

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(答案→)Recently a survey has been carried out on whether you take notes in class or not among all the 2105 senior students. I am so worried about the finding of the survey. The data shows that only a quarter of the students surveyed often take note in class,which helps to get their studies improved ,while about 37% of the students do a try ,but they don't know how to take notes ,hoping to get a hand from the teachers. To my surprise, from the survey I know about 38% of the students have never taken notes, for they have no idea what to take in class. In my opinion, our teachers should tell the students what to write down in class so that we can make greater progress in study. 
解析:考生首先要仔细审题,包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构,(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,这是半开放性作文,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点,考生要多使用复杂句,一句话中多包含些信息,如范文里面的句子:The data shows that only a quarter of the students surveyed often take note in class,which helps to get their studies improved ,while about 37% of the students do a try ,but they don't know how to take notes ,hoping to get a hand from the teachers.既有宾语从句,又有定语从句,也有while连接的并列句。
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