今天是星期天，爸爸带我去动物园。动物园里有许多人，他们也是去看动物的。动物园里有许多动物，有老虎、熊猫、大象、狮子、长颈鹿等，他们十分可爱，我非常喜欢它们，我最喜欢熊猫。但我认为这些动物生活得不愉快，它们应该生活在森林中（in the forest）。.
Today is Sunday, my father takes me to the zoo. There are many people in the zoo, they go to see the animals, too. There are many kinds of animals in the zoo. They are tigers, pandas, lions, elephants and giraffes. They are very cute, I like them very much. My favorite animals are pandas .But I don’t think these animals are happy, they should live in the forest.
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(答案→)Today is Sunday, my father takes me to the zoo. There are many people in the zoo, they go to see the animals, too. There are many kinds of animals in the zoo. They are tigers, pandas, lions, elephants and giraffes. They are very cute, I like them very much. My favorite animals are pandas .But I don’t think these animals are happy, they should live in the forest.
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