不对帮改一下.I'd also like to thank your,it was terrible when earthquake finish ,I remember thousand of families were killed and many children were left without parents,The number of people who were killed
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I'd like to thank you.After the earthquake,it looked horrible everywhere.I heard that thousands of houses were destroyed,too many people were killed by this disaster.Lots of children became orphans.The number of casualties is over 4000000.I think you will do your best to start building your house soon after the earthquake.
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thank your改thank you
when earthquake finish 改after the earthquake
thousand of 改thousands of
your start hard built your home 改you started to build your home hard
Ifelt not long 改I felt it wasn't long
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