假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增添、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增添、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写出改加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Our mothers acpanied us to school in the first day. Soon a teacher came and led us to a classroom. There we were put into four separate class. Some children begin to cry as the parents were not allowing into the classroom. I did not cry because I have been to kindergarten before. Actual my mother went home soon after for she knew I would be all right. It was enjoyable time for me as I got to know my new classmates. The teacher was very busy for writing down our information so they had plenty of time to ourselves. In the meantime some children continued to sob although their parents looked in anxiously through the window.in-on 

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(答案→)in-on 
解析:文章介绍了作者第一天上幼儿园的场景。
【小题1】 我们的妈妈在第一天陪我们去学校。在第一天,用介词on
【小题2】我们被分到四个不同的班级。Four后面接可数名词复数:class—classes
【小题3】一些孩子开始哭了,因为父母不允许进入教室。这篇文章用的是一般过去式:begin—began
【小题4】parents和allow是被动关系,用allowed
【小题5】我没有哭,因为我以前上过幼儿园的。这里是过去的过去的动作,用过去完成时: have-had
【小题6】实际上,我妈妈很快回家了,因为她知道我很好:修饰整个句子,用副词:Actual—Actually
【小题7】这是一段愉快的时光。表示“一段时光”,was 后加an 
【小题8】老师在忙于写下我们的信息。Be busy(in) doing忙于做…,去掉for或for改为in
【小题9】所以我们有很多自己的时间。和ourselves对应用we
【小题10】同时,当父母通过窗户焦急的看着的时候,一些孩子继续在哭。连词错误:although—while/when/as
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