Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy take pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly．Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tiring that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．
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【小题1】Like everyone knows, l因为like是介词后面要接名词代词，而后面是句子的要用as。
【小题2】it's ∧famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals在文中首次提到那是一座著名的峨眉山，表示泛指。
【小题3】It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 因为it是时间，后面用when引导从句。
【小题4】The three of them were very excited. 文中提到我和父母亲强调我们三个人，并非指他们，故把them改为us.
【小题5】we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.在这个句子中，visit这一动作和fed以及told并列。
【小题6】On the way up I was busy take pictures busy后面要用动词ing形式，故把take改为taking.
【小题7】The time passes quickly．时间过得很快，指的是当时过得快，故把passes改为passed.
【小题8】The food was expensive and the service was good. 时间过得很快，指的是当时过得快，故把passes改为passed.
【小题9】I was so tiring that指人感到累用形容词的ed形式，某物令人….用tiring.
【小题10】去掉at the moment 后面接句子故把介词去掉。“一…就…”