【优秀英语作文】求一篇优秀英语作文?

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【答案】 太奇考研老师给个范文——
　　As illustrated in the cartoon,each person sits in their own work room.In front of them is a puter.Everyone looks at the screen carefully,and municate with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face.Their work places are placed like a net.And below the cartoon,there is a topic which says:the near and far among the Internet.
　　From the cartoon,we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message:with the popularity of puters,people from all over the world bee nearer by using the internet to municate with each other.Meanwhile,people also bee far away from their friends.All of us accept the fact that the development of the internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life,for instance,we can buy a book on the net instead of going to a bookstore.Besides,we can municate with our friends on the net without going out of home.But we can't ignore the other side of these:the time we spend with friends or family bees less.And we hardly see them once in a week.It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.
　　To my best understanding,we should use the net to municate with each other in a proper way.It is just a tool when we really need it to serve us.If we want to keep our friendship more effectively,we should spend more time with them in our real life.Only in this way can we not only make full use of the munication tool on the net but also make our friendship stronger.
　　评语：该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务,内容完整,既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了其隐含的意思.语言流畅,措辞准确,句型结构有变化,有效使用了连接手段,内容连贯,层次分明,文章易于理解,仅有个别语言错误,字数符合要求.